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Water Element lineart by ~Kuro-Mizu:iconKuro-Mizu:

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©2007-2009 ~Kuro-Mizu
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EDIT- replaced with the lineart! I fixed some things... I think it looks pretty good... any suggestions?

WHEEEEEE the sketch for the elements project I am working on hehe!

if your interested in joining here is the journals with the info-
[link]
[link]

Also here is :icondiogenes: sketch-
[link]

and here is :icontrueblue-lua: final piece-
[link]

thanks for viewing!

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~Tajaia Dec 29, 2007, 10:01:04 AM
It looks fairly good for the most part, but it seems when you tried to do wooshy forshortening, it just didnt turn out, exploring is always good though, hope you get the hang of it ^^ Upper body and face look really good
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~soul-alive Dec 29, 2007, 11:04:55 AM
Looks great so far, Sean. Her face and hair came out great, and the pose works well too. I might suggest tweaking her bent leg some, as the proportions on it are a bit odd, but everything else looks great!

--
People say I'm strange, does it make me a stranger
That my best friend was born in a manger - dcTalk

A Cruce Salus, a webcomic.
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~Kuro-Mizu Dec 29, 2007, 11:07:38 AM
Yeah I noticed that after I posted and did some adjustments... the finished version should look better!
:icontajaia:
~Tajaia Dec 29, 2007, 12:42:07 PM
Yay, I'm glad you appreciate the crits, I dont want to hurt your feelings or anything right? haha
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~Kuro-Mizu Dec 29, 2007, 9:35:40 PM
Thanks! I noticed the weirdness of the lower portion of her body after posting...hopefully this version looks better ^_^"""
:iconkuro-mizu:
~Kuro-Mizu Dec 29, 2007, 9:38:28 PM
Yes... my poor little feelings... they trip alot and hurt themselves so its best not to let them get hurt by others.

XP

that was a joke btw... a bad joke at that..

I am in a weird mood!
:iconsoul-alive:
~soul-alive Dec 29, 2007, 10:36:58 PM
It looks great! I like the addition of the colored lineart, and how you put the eye colors in. Her swishy hair looks great too.

--
People say I'm strange, does it make me a stranger
That my best friend was born in a manger - dcTalk

A Cruce Salus, a webcomic.
:icontajaia:
~Tajaia Jan 1, 2008, 1:22:03 AM
Well I'm glad ^_^ Keep up the great work, you know I dont have anything to defend myself with, I haven't made a DA post since 2007!
Seriously...its been a long time x.x
I draw a lot but no scanner x.x
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